Friday, November 28, 2008

more!

another watercolour memory sketch

2 comments:

Andrea Gerstmann said...

I really like this. It reminds me of that show "what not to wear" the seemingly random outfit choices people make are hilarious. When the shapes they make are exaggerated, its even better. My only critique is in the shading of the coat you lost a lot of that larger shape and general shading. Theres a lot of small puffy parts you had to define with shading and its easy to get lost in the details and underestimate the overall change in value not to mention that the shapes are exaggerated so the shading should consequently be more dramatic then you observe.

Amok said...

very true Andrea. I realized there was something lacking in that coat, and didn't realize what it was. Thanks for commenting!